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myxstorie ([personal profile] myxstorie) wrote2008-11-23 11:23 pm
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The PIN Comment-Fic Post

THE PIN COMMENT-FIC EXCHANGE


I think the idea behind this is pretty simple, but in case it's not obvious...

Rules:
  • Any requests and fic must be Pin-centric. Other characters/pairings are encouraged welcome, but Pin must be the focus.
  • If you have a request, please at least try to write something! It's an exchange, play fair.
  • Please try and make replies to requests longer than drabble length! (i.e. over 600 words)
Anything goes! Porn, not porn, fluff, crack, weird fetishes and such like. Just be sure to say if you specifically do or don't want porn! But let's be honest, most of us are just here for the porn.

And, to get the ball rolling...

Prompts:

POPOLO 2008.01 Interview
Yamapi's Hong Kong trip - Jin can't even manage a few days on his own
Pinnifer. Need I say anything more.
Frottage (the more public the better)
Phone sex because I am totally shameless and adore fics on this (could be doubled up with the HK prompt?)
Pin watch porn
Yamapi thinks he's getting good at English. Jin proves him wrong.

And some picture prompts, because every anonymeme needs some!


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Fulfilled Prompts:
   Author names will be added once they are revealed!
Please reply to each prompt you wrote from the lj username you would like to be linked to ^_^

After some prompting, I have decided to leave prompts open, except replies no longer need to be anonymous ^_^

PART 7

(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
When he wakes up the next time, the sun is high in the air and the morning chill has faded into rare autumn warmth, and Yamapi stretches the length of the bed, sighing contently as he feels something in his chest. Calm, rested, happy, those kinds of feelings. He’s forgotten how wonderful those feelings are. He turns around to grasp for Jin, only to find the other’s not there. He feels his heart sink with, what is it, confusion, anxiety, as that spot of the bed is cold under his touch. Jin must have gotten out a long time ago. Yamapi glances at the clock; it’s barely after noon, and he knows Jin has no work today.

He throws the covers off him and pulls on some clothes, not really caring, and stumbles out the door. Jin’s no where in the apartment. There’s no evidence of him having gotten up to make breakfast or anything, either. Worried that maybe something has happened to him, Yamapi pulls on his coat and shoves his feet into his shoes and heads outside. He doesn’t know where he’s going, but he knows he can’t sit still at home. What a guardian angel he is, losing the one person he’s supposed to watch immediately after—

Yamapi stops in his tracks, eyes widening as he realizes what happened. Of course Jin left, why wouldn’t he? Yamapi would, too, had he been in Jin’s position. Yamapi wasn’t real, he was an angel, he wasn’t even human, of course Jin would be freaked out. Of course Jin would leave. Yamapi must have been completely delusional to have thought otherwise. Jin left and he wouldn’t go back until he knew Yamapi was no longer there and Yamapi lives to protect Jin, to make sure he’s happy and safe, and Yamapi will do whatever he needs to to ensure that. Even if it means leaving himself.

Yamapi can’t move, thousands of feeling — those horrible feelings he never missed as an angel — overwhelming every never in his body. He doesn’t know what to do now, where to go, how-how could he even survive without Jin? It was unfathomable, it was—

“You are so stupid,” a familiar voice says and Yamapi turns to find Tegoshi standing before him, arms crossed over his chest and looking unpleased.

“What? What’s happening?” Yamapi demands desperately. “I-I can feel. I can taste and sleep and—”

“You turned human,” Tegoshi interrupts easily.

Yamapi’s eyes widen. “Really? I-I’m human again?”

Tegoshi nods, amused. “Yes.”

“But how? Is that even possible?”

“Of course it’s possible, it just happened to you.”

“But why?”

Tegoshi sighs. “You love him. He makes you feel again and those feelings changed you.”

“W-Wait, you said anything about l-love?” Yamapi exclaims, feels heat sweep up in his cheeks, but Tegoshi only smirks knowingly.

“I’m God, remember? I know how you feel,” Tegoshi says. “If you don’t believe me, then what else do you call this?”

Yamapi shakes his head. “I-I have no idea,” he says. “So, I-I’m no longer an angel?”

“Of course not. Where do you think the term fallen angels came from? You’ve fallen, and you’re human now. This is your second chance.”

“But’s he’s left me,” Yamapi says without thinking. He feels his heart clench painfully in his chest.

Tegoshi rolls his eyes. “You lose all your faith when you turn back human,” he says with a shake of his head and before Yamapi can ask what he means, he’s gone.

It it were possible, Yamapi feels even more confused now. He was human again, but with no where to go, no one to see, nothing to do. He was human with another chance, a chance to be with Jin. But Jin. Jin was gone and right now, Yamapi would much rather be dead again.

He’s so wrapped up in his thoughts that he doesn’t realize how he’s being shoved into rudely by passerby, so engrossed in his vast emotions that he stumbles and starts walking without looking, and it’s not until the honks of horns and screeching tires and a familiar warmth grabbing his arm and pulling, does he come back to reality with a jolt.

The noises scream in his ears as if on surround sound, and his heart races as he’s pulled to his feet. Yamapi feels his throat go dry when he finds Jin’s face close to his own.

PART 8

(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
“You idiot!” Jin exclaims, eyes wide and frantic. “Don’t scare me like that!”

“J-Jin?” Yamapi chokes out, not believing this. Jin was there, right before him, and he was real because Yamapi can feel the heat from his skin on his arm, can see his eyes flicker with relief and worry.

“Yes, it’s me,” Jin says, dragging Yamapi back to the sidewalk and heading in the direction of the apartment. “Are you all right?”

“I-I don’t know yet,” Yamapi says, his mind swimming, and Jin just tightens his grip on Yamapi’s arm.

Neither says a word on the walk back to Jin’s apartment, and once they arrive, Jin still won’t reliquinsh his grip on Yamapi’s arm. Yamapi and pulling his feet out from his shoes, wondering how to tell Jin to let go so he could get his coat off as well, and then he’s being pulled close, Jin’s arms wrapping around him and holding on tightly. Yamapi’s heart thuds in his chest and he doesn’t know what to do, just stands still, breathes in the smell of shampoo in Jin’s hair.

Jin’s whispering softly into his ear, “You scared me this morning by vanishing. What were you doing? Where did you go?”

Yamapi’s brows furrow and he pushes Jin back, perhaps a bit more forceful than necessary. “Where did I go? Where were you?”

Jin bites his lip and looks away. Yamapi realizes he’s embarrassed.

“Jin?” he asks carefully, but Jin shakes his head and rushes to the kitchen. Confused, Yamapi follows him, grabbing his arm and turning him around. “What’s wrong?”

“You left. After we…” he trails off for a second, looks at the floor. “If you left, you obviously don’t want to stay here anymore, right? Then, then you should go.”

Yamapi drops his hand immediately as if he’d been burned. “What are you talking about? I-I don’t want to leave!” he exclaims, almost close to laughing because this situation is so bizarre.

Jin stares at him for a moment, then says, “Then why did you leave?”

“Because you were gone!” Yamapi says. “I-I thought that you had left. I mean, I-I’m not, well, I wasn’t, but…”

“Wait, what do you mean?” Jin interrupts.

Yamapi sighs. “This is insane, but…I’m human again.”

Jin’s eyes widen. “That can happen?”

“Apparently,” Yamapi says.

“How?”

Yamapi looks away quickly, not sure how to explain that because he loves Jin, he turned human? Did Jin even love him? Jin has only known him for a month.

“Pi?” Jin prompts, stepping up to him until they’re a mere breath away.

Yamapi bites his lip and meets his gaze, swallows down the lump in his throat. Jin notices the hesitation, reaches out to swipe Yamapi’s hair from his face, fingers hot against Yamapi’s skin as he trails them along his cheek, then his jaw, and Yamapi’s heart skips a beat from the warm look in Jin’s eyes.

“I-I’m human again because I love you,” Yamapi breathes against Jin’s lips. “Those feelings changed me back.”

Jin watches him for a moment, seeming to determine whether Yamapi was telling the truth. Then he smirks. “You love me?”

Yamapi groans and hides his face. “No,” he mumbles, stubborn. “Who would?”

“Clearly, you would,” Jin replies, and Yamapi can hear the smirk in his voice without having to turn and look at him.

Yamapi just groans again and tries to move away, but Jin’s got a hand on his hip, the other on his chin, turning him back, and before Yamapi can say another word, Jin’s kissing him. Yamapi reacts immediately, turning to face him fully, hands sliding down his sides and resting on Jin’s waist, tilting his head just a bit for more access. It’s a soft, slow kiss, both of them taking their time. Yamapi’s skin tingles from Jin’s touch, the way his hands move along his back, slipping beneath the hem of Yamapi’s shirt, the heat from his fingertips leaving white-hot dots on his skin. Yamapi tightens his grip on Jin’s waist and pulls them flush together, Jin moaning into his mouth at the sudden contact, then pulls away, slowly licking his lips.

PART 9 END

(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
“So,” Jin says, smirking as he notices Yamapi staring at his mouth. “What was that about not loving me?”

Yamapi makes an embarrassed sound and drops his head, resting his forehead on Jin’s shoulder. Jin laughs, the sound warm and heartfelt, sending waves of pleasure up and down Yamapi’s spine. “Shut up,” he says.

Jin smiles and moves back to catch Yamapi’s gaze. “Are you really human, now?”

Yamapi nods. “Yes.”

“Oh.”

Yamapi glares, pinches his side. “Why do you sound so disappointed?” he demands, and Jin squirms away from him, sitting down on the couch and pulling Yamapi down with him.

“I’m not. I just, you know, thought it was cool to be fucking an angel.”

Yamapi rolls his eyes. “You would get off on that.”

“Hey,” Jin whines, pouting and Yamapi laughs.

They fall into silence for a small moment, then Yamapi remembers about that morning. “Where did you go? If…If you weren’t planning on leaving, then, where were you?”

Now Jin blushes, glancing away with embarrassment and it’s not until Yamapi reaches over to swipe his fingers along his collarbone, with threats to keep doing it, that he relents, screaming, “Okay, okay! I was getting you a key!”

Yamapi stops attacking him, and his eyes widen. “A-A key?”

“Yes, moron, for the apartment,” Jin says. He rubs the back of his neck sheepishly and says, “I-I wasn’t leaving. I wasn’t even thinking anything close to that.”

“Oh. Well. Uhm.” Yamapi feels a little stupid for having jumped to conclusions, for not having trusted Jin. But then Jin is leaning over and pressing a small kiss to Yamapi’s forehead, fingers curve into the back of his neck.

“I wasn’t going to leave,” Jin repeats, breath soft against Yamapi’s skin.

“Cut me some slack,” Yamapi replies, miffed. “I just turned back human. What was I supposed to think?”

“So, if you’re human again, you can eat and sleep and feel like before?” Jin asks.

“Yes,” Yamapi says. “I-I’ve been feeling since that day I saved you.”

“Do you regret it?”

Yamapi shakes his head vigorously. “No, no, not at all. I-I’m glad, really, I—”

Jin cuts him off by tugging on his arm and pulling him down against the arm, fusing their mouths together harshly. Yamapi groans and threads fingers through Jin’s hair, gripping tightly as Jin’s hand darts under his shirt, traces the lines of his abs. Jin pulls back a moment later and Yamapi makes a noise of protest.

“You can feel all of that, now?” Jin breathes into his ear.

“Yes,” Yamapi replies.

Jin sucks along his neck leisurely, asks, “And that?”

Yamapi tightens his fingers in Jin’s hair. “Yes.”

Awesome,” Jin says, glancing up to meet Yamapi’s gaze, eyes shining with mischief.

Yamapi hears his heart beating loudly in his ears and can feel his veins jolt with pleasure. He smiles, ghosting his lips against Jin’s, and says, “Will you stop talking and make me feel some more?”

"Gladly, angel," Jin answers and when Jin kisses him this time, Yamapi can feel it everywhere and he's incredibly glad to be alive.

~end~


;laksjdgl D: sorry, really, for the lame and fail and ;alskjdg ;___; I do hope you liked it though. ♥

Re: PART 9 END

[identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
YOU ARE AMAZING AND WONDERFUL AND I LOVE YOU. ALKSFHASLFKHALFH THIS IS SO AMAZING OMG I DON'T EVEN HAVE WORDS. THEY SAVE EACH OTHER AND YAMAPI IS AWESOME AND JIN CALLS HIM ANGEL AND PI AND ALFHALFKHAF "OH, YOU LIKE ME" AND AKSHFALFKHALFHAFLH *_________________________* AND GOD TEGOSHI LMAO AND KISSING AND PI FEELING AND ALKSFSAKFHAFLKHAFLKAHFLAKFHALFHSALFA.

I LOVE YOU.

Re: PART 9 END

(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
*_____________________________* ;LKAJSD;LKGAN;SLDKGLSASL OH GOD. I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT! YAY. ;LASKJDG;ALSKJD dying, omg. a;lsdkjglsd *____*

I LOVE YOU TOO. ♥♥♥♥♥

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(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD that was amazing! 'It might be a few comments'? *snickers* XD

I especially love the very last line.. 'Gladly, angel,' AD:WEFWGH%$W ANGEL SHOULD TOTALLY BE JIN'S NEW NAME FOR PI *__* It's sappy and fluffy and sickly but I LOVE IT!

Whoever you are, ILU! Thanks for writing this!!

Re: PART 9 END

(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
alksjd;glakjsd *_______* I am happy you liked it! Thank you so much, omg asldkjg ILU2 <3333
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[identity profile] spurious.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
THIS IS SO EPIC. :D v. v. pleased.

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(Anonymous) 2008-12-02 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
a;lsdkgjlaksd i am glad you think so! thank you! ♥♥

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[identity profile] saturnianlove.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
AHHHHHHHHHHH OH MY GOSH THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL. It's such a fitting, fairy-tale like story for the two of them ;_____; They are in love and will overcome anything, it's as simple as that ♥ Ugh ugh ugh this was just so sweet and perfect and Yamapi feeling omg so amazing. These roles just fit them so perfectly ;__; I'd totally watch a movie like this. OR, this would totally be an episode of a ten part drama in which Pin get together 10 different ways. hell yes.

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(Anonymous) 2008-12-04 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
alskdl;s you make me all *_________* with your lovely comment! i am very much glad that you liked it. ♥ thank you so much! :D

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[identity profile] saturnianlove.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
ugh it just makes me feel like life is really great and Jin calling Yamapi angel is incredibly sweet and hot at the same time. This story is so good for Christmastime, I think :D

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[identity profile] anamuan.livejournal.com 2008-12-05 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
“I’m an angel,” Yamapi says. “That protects you.”
you won me with this line.



also! TOTAL LACK OF LAME AND FAIL. you lied to us. lie to me more

Re: PART 9 END

[identity profile] tatoeba.livejournal.com 2008-12-05 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
ah too lazy to be anon now. and ;alskd it is lame though~ :\\\

*squishes* thank you, hun~ i am glad you liked it. :))) ♥

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[identity profile] ky-rin.livejournal.com 2008-12-05 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD (TEGOSHI). *________*

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[identity profile] tatoeba.livejournal.com 2008-12-05 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
hee, thank you~ i am glad you liked it. :))

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[identity profile] samy-rp.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
This was soo gorgeous! Thank you so much for writing it!!!