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THE PIN COMMENT-FIC EXCHANGE

I think the idea behind this is pretty simple, but in case it's not obvious...

Rules:

Any requests and fic must be Pin-centric. Other characters/pairings are ~~encouraged~~ welcome, but Pin must be the focus.
If you have a request, please at least try to write something! It's an exchange, play fair.
Please try and make replies to requests longer than drabble length! (i.e. over 600 words)

Anything goes! Porn, not porn, fluff, crack, weird fetishes and such like. Just be sure to say if you specifically do or don't want porn! ~~But let's be honest, most of us are just here for the porn.~~

And, to get the ball rolling...

Prompts:

POPOLO 2008.01 Interview
Yamapi's Hong Kong trip - Jin can't even manage a few days on his own
Pinnifer. Need I say anything more.
Frottage (the more public the better)
Phone sex ~~because I am totally shameless and adore fics on this~~ (could be doubled up with the HK prompt?)
Pin watch porn
Yamapi thinks he's getting good at English. Jin proves him wrong.

And some picture prompts, because every anonymeme needs some!

Fulfilled Prompts: Author names will be added once they are revealed!

5 4 Times Pin Try to Have Hot Sex but Fail by silver_rose88
After Hours by crystallekil
Bloody Jin (prompt pic) by no1_jo
Bloody Jin #2 (prompt pic) by no1_jo
Bodyswitch by silver_rose88
Epic-Prostitute!Jin by shatteredinu
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun by silver_rose88
Jin/Ryo/Shirota/Pi Foursome by anamuan
Jinnifer desu by crystallekil
Kinky S&M Pin by spurious
Lonely Yamapi by shatteredinu
Never Underestimate the Power of Baby Sisters by crystallekil
Our Special Brand of Member-Ai by silver_rose88
Phone Booth by crystallekil
Pin Angst by myxstorie
Pin Falling in Love by shatteredinu
Pin Have Sex in a Room full of Sleeping NEWS Members by shatteredinu
Pin Have Sex in Someone Else's Bed by silver_rose88
Pin Voyeurism by kyuushin
Pornstar!Pin by silver_rose88
School Reunion Pin by myxstorie
Simply Want to Feel by beililee
Stoner!Pin by spurious
Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #1) by anonymous
Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #2) by myxstorie
Reveals are upon us!

Please reply to each prompt you wrote from the lj username you would like to be linked to ^_^

After some prompting, I have decided to leave prompts open, except replies no longer need to be anonymous ^_^

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He tries to be quiet. He really, really tries to be quiet, but seriously, it's like Ryo has super hearing or something. Jin's barely crept over to Yamapi's side when he hears a muttered "Touch him around us and you both die" from beside his feet, where Ryo's head just happens to be. Jin has complete faith in his creeping skills, so the only other possibilities are that Ryo had happened to be awake when he came in, or he has super-human sense. Jin suspects the latter.

Jin huffs quietly and climbs up on the couch anyway, careful not to kick or dislodge or otherwise wake Yamapi up. "I just want to cuddle with him," he mumbles, courteous enough to keep his voice down, because it seems that some members of NewS don't have super hearing. Jin's not sure why Ryo, Shige, Koyama and Tegoshi are passed out (disregarding Ryo's annoying state of consciousness) on Yamapi's living room floor, nor does he know where Massu is, or what they were doing in the first place. It does quite mess up his plans for a little midnight mischief, though, and he tries to control his mind as he curls up half on top of Yamapi. He can feel Ryo's eyes on him, accusing, but he blatantly ignores it, even making a show of brushing his thumb over Yamapi's lip just to make him look away (because even though Jin doesn't mind a little exhibitionism, he doesn't trust Ryo not to figure him out and wake everyone else up).

He waits until he thinks enough time has passed for Ryo to fall asleep, before he turns his attention back to Yamapi. His friend is still sleeping peacefully beneath him, and Jin takes a moment to memorize his face. It's nothing he hasn't seen before, but sometimes Yamapi is just too beautiful not to look at, like now. Jin takes in the way his lips are slightly parted, the smoothness of his skin, the way all lines of worry or concentration have faded away. Jin always wants Yamapi to look as peaceful as he does now, and for a moment he's tempted to hold back and let him sleep, but a pointed throb between his legs makes up his mind about that.

He's subtle when he kisses Yamapi, just in case Ryo's still watching (not that Jin really cares, he already knows Ryo's a kinky bastard). Even asleep, Yamapi's mouth is plush and warm beneath his, and Jin has no trouble coaxing his lips apart. He sucks gently on Yamapi's bottom lip, and when he doesn't get a response, he bites gently. That makes Yamapi stir a little, but he doesn't wake up, and Jin grins, wondering just how much he can get away with before Yamapi does wake.

A lot, it turns out. Jin knows Yamapi's a fairly heavy sleeper (and he doesn't blame him, with how little time he gets to take advantage of it), but even he is slightly surprised when he gets Yamapi's shirt completely unbuttoned and even leaves a mark on Yamapi's neck before Yamapi moves again at all. Still, Jin doesn't mind taking his time--he'd planned on coaxing Yamapi awake anyway--and turns his attention to Yamapi's nipples, putting his mouth to work on one, then the other. Yamapi's breath hitches for a moment, and Jin lifts his head, but there's no further response.

"Idiot," he hears from the floor, and it makes him jump, but when he looks down, he sees it's only Ryo.

"What do you want," Jin mutters back, displeased with the interruption. Screw it, he thinks, and he goes back to kissing along Yamapi's chest. He doesn't care if Ryo wants to watch--they're pretty hot anyway.

"You have to be direct," Ryo whispers, apparently disinclined to wake the others. He has a look of disdain on his face, and Jin assumes it has to do with the thought of actually helping him fuck Yamapi. "Like this," he continues, and Jin jumps when he feels something brush his thigh, looking down quickly to see Ryo's hand slip between Yamapi's legs. It's an awkward angle, but Ryo doesn't take his time, placing his hand on the front of Yamapi's pants and pressing down hard.

Oddly enough, it works, and Yamapi's eyes fly open, settling on Jin's face. "Jin?" He mumbles sleepily, and Jin has the sense to put a finger to Yamapi's lips, silencing him. He feels Ryo's hand slip away, but he doesn't look, instead leaning down to whisper in Yamapi's ear.

"Can't wake the others," he says, blowing gently in his ear, and Yamapi shivers, nearly shutting his eyes again. Jin thinks he can hear him say 'what are you doing here so late', but he pretends like he can't, tracing Yamapi's lips before claiming them with his own. Yamapi seems to understand after that--they've always been rather intuitive to each other, after all--if the way he tangles his fingers in Jin's hair is any indication, and Jin wastes no time in curling his fingers in the waistband of Yamapi's pants, carefully easing them down.

Yamapi's slow to wake up, but Jin has no problem helping him, wrapping one hand tight around Yamapi's cock and stroking slowly, ever so slowly. Yamapi almost loses himself and moans once or twice, but Jin shuts him up with his tongue before he can, and neither of them really mind that as an alternative anyway. By the time Yamapi's fully hard, Jin's begun rocking slowly against his thigh, just for the sake of some relief.

There's lube under the couch, and Jin almost pokes Ryo in the eye trying to get it, nearly having his fingers are bitten off as a result. But when he dares to glance down, he sees Ryo has a hand in his pants too, and he smirks, feeling cocky with the truth. He doesn't mention it, though, kissing along Yamapi's shoulder as he slicks his fingers, pushing his own hips forward when Yamapi feels the urge to help him out of his own pants.

Prepping Yamapi is hard to do quietly, mostly because Yamapi is a vocal person in bed (Jin's always found that funny, considering how quiet he tends to be in public). Yamapi's body is stretched taut beneath him, shaking with the effort of being as quiet as he can, and Jin kisses him long and deep just so he can make small noises in his mouth. He goes quick, quicker than he ought to, but Yamapi's ready enough and about to scream his lungs out--plus, Jin's been hard since he left his own apartment--so it's with great caution that he folds Yamapi's legs back and pushes slowly into him.

It's been quite a long time since they first started having sex together, but Jin doesn't think it's any less incredible than the first (well, okay, the second, the first had been a fumbled, awkward experience he'd almost rather forget about). Yamapi's body is hot around him, a tightness that Jin doubts anyone could ever compare to. He's absolute perfection, that moment when Jin first slides into him--mouth open wide in a silent cry, chest heaving with restrained, laboured breath, the muscles in his arms straining as he digs his nails into Jin's shoulders. Jin knows there will be marks there from his fingers, it always happens, but he can't bring himself to mind, too wrapped up in trying not to drown in Yamapi's body.

Jin almost forgets about the others, opening his mouth to moan out Yamapi's name, but Yamapi's awake now, and the part of him that's always in Leader-mode has him crashing his mouth against Jin's before he can make a sound. Jin goes fast from the start, unable to hold back after doing so for so long already, but Yamapi doesn't complain, just mouths his name against his lips and rolls his hips in a smooth wave. They're a perfect balance together, really, their own little yin-yang, and Jin's slept with other people before, but he's never had the rhythm they share with anybody else. Their completeness wraps around him like a thread, tighter and tighter, until he can't breathe, can't think, can't do anything but feel.

Surprisingly, Yamapi comes before he does. Yamapi doesn't expect that, either, if the startled little gasp he makes says anything about it. It's all Jin can do not to moan when he feels Yamapi come on his hand, but he simply pushes harder, deeper, absorbing pleasure until he's too full of it, and he spills over the edge, too. He lies against Yamapi in a heap of sweat and skin, breathing heavily and basking in the afterglow they're sharing. Jin almost falls asleep like that, but the weight of a heavy comforter falling on top of him jolts him awake again.

"Please get dressed under there," Shige says, in a serene tone of voice that only comes with denial. He's pointedly not looking at them, and judging by the way Yamapi's quivering slightly, Jin knows he's trying not to laugh. "And next time, feel free to kick us out. Really. I insist."

Turning his head, Jin sees the others awake, too. Tegoshi is smiling sleepily at them like it's perfectly normal, Ryo seems torn between rolling his eyes and covering Tegoshi's, and Koyama seems to be more concerned with finding out where Massu went than the indecent state of the men on the couch. Jin has the decency to feel a little embarrassed, and he pulls the comforter over their heads, taking the opportunity to kiss Yamapi again.

"Hey," he mumbles, grinning slowly. "Wanna go for round two?"

"I heard that."

The only response Shige gets is a moan.

um, good morning elaborate descriptions of yamapi's hotness. :DDDDDDDDDDDD

i love how massu is entirely not there. HE OPTED OUT OF THE SLEEP ORGY. (koyama does not approve.)

LMAO RYO HELPS. win.

poor shige. except not really.

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MASSU IS TOTALLY IN THE KITCHEN--*shot*

:Dv

Shige totez wanted to get off on it too. He just has principles.

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oh this is so perfect. ryo helping a;sldkjg *_____* and lol oh poor traumitized shige. ♥

I feel like Shige is always kind of traumatized whenever he's in the same room with Pin. xD ♥ ♥ ♥

Aaaah <3! I had to look twice to see if its my prompt. Waking up to this is .... I don't need coffee let's just say. Very much awake!

To think they tried so hard to be quiet. I don't know which is more of a win, Ryo helping or him getting off from it or Shige. Actually the whole fic is pure win from the way you fleshed it out from the prompt. I couldn't think of what reaction Tegoshi would've had but it's so fitting that he doesn't mind.

I'm bit incoherent to make a more sensible comment because I'm still flailing.

*_* you wouldn't happen to write more fics with PIN do you?

♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. lkahsflkh I had kind of a hard time deciding who to pick to be in the room, but it seemed like the best choices. xD Massu is innocent. :P *shot*

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I do! :DDD It's been kind of a while since I've been absorbed by je_hols, but yes, I do. >w<

Holy fuck that was awesome! Ryo helping was inspired, and then getting off on it was even better *__* Shige cracked me up at the end XD I love how IC your characters seem, that's just how I can imagine them all reacting <3 Now I just need to find out who you are so I can shower you with even more affection XD

Thank you! >w< I'm really glad you liked it. And I assume reveals are going to go up for this eventually, so. :Dv

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