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myxstorie ([personal profile] myxstorie) wrote2010-03-30 04:25 pm

The Pin Anon-CommentFic Exchange: The Second


♥ PIN FIC ANONYMEME ♥
THE SECOND



Okay guys, time to fess up! Comment to anything you wrote with your username, or something to say I WROTE THIS, so that we know who to fawn over for the awesome fics posted ♥

You are all free to repost, and if anyone is still writing, that's great! You don't have to post it anon now, though. Either reply to the prompt with the fic, or post it up and link to it so that your recipient knows where to look :D

Thank you all so much! The turnout was wonderful, and the fic, even better ♥

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Rules:
> Requests must be Pin (that is, Yamapi/Jin) centric. Other pairings/characters (male and female) are welcome, but Pin (or Pin+1,etc) must be the focus.
> Drama/Movie characters are a-OK!
> Make sure you give your request a rating if you do (or don't) want fluff/gen/porn.
> Requests and replies must be anonymous. You are free to reveal yourself from April 14th, unless it dies before then.

Fulfilled Requests:
> Hayato/Akira
> Wake-Up Call by [livejournal.com profile] sashjun, reposted here
> Ai for You by [livejournal.com profile] myxstorie, reposted here
> New Neighbours by [livejournal.com profile] death_note13
> Distance by [livejournal.com profile] tatoeba, reposted here
> Making the Impossible Possible by [livejournal.com profile] tatoeba, reposted here
>
Baby Don't Go by [livejournal.com profile] death_note13
> Nice Day for a White Wedding by [livejournal.com profile] myxstorie, reposted here
> Lean on Me by [livejournal.com profile] tatoeba, reposted here
> Bundle of Joy by [livejournal.com profile] myxstorie, reposted here
> Of Waterfalls and Kisses by [livejournal.com profile] sashjun, reposted here
> Long Way Down by [livejournal.com profile] death_note13
> Troublemaker by [livejournal.com profile] tatoeba, reposted here
> Property of Yamashita Tomohisa by [livejournal.com profile] zheinpathos, reposted here
> Don't Meet the Parents by [livejournal.com profile] elizajet



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Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

(Anonymous) 2010-04-02 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
"Chinese or Italian... You're the one that's been away, what do you fancy, Pi?"

Yamapi turns to look at him with raised eyebrows, and Jin freezes.

"Sorry! S-Sorry, I, uh. Ai-chan's always saying it and I guess it just-"

Yamapi shushes him with a shake of his head. "I like it," he says, eyes still bright, and Jin's mouth twitches in return.

They decide on pizza. It's the weekend tomorrow, so Jin doesn't mind Ai staying up a little later than usual to watch movies with them, and it's far easier to handle a slice of pizza with both eyes on the television than a pair of chopsticks. Jin leaves them both still looking through Ai's artwork, his daughter far happier now that she's got all of Yamapi's attention to herself.

The pizza menu is on top of the stack of mail on the kitchen counter, and with a glance behind him to check they're still engrossed, Jin leafs through it until he finds Yamapi's note, hastily scrawled on a sheet of lined paper torn from a notebook.

Jin,

Going to Hokkaido for a few weeks for work.

Sorry I didn't tell you properly - you're out and it's all happened really last minute.

Tell Ai-chan I'm sorry and make sure she knows that Kuma-kun's arm still needs lots of rest!

Try not to miss me too much!

- Yamashita


Between the last two lines, there's something else that Yamapi's scribbled through, over and over until it's all but illegible, but if Jin holds it up to the light and squints his eyes just so, he can just about make it out.

I know I'll miss you.

OP

[identity profile] tatoeba.livejournal.com 2010-04-03 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
a;lskdn;alsdkngalsdg this is so, so cute and totally what i wanted! ;laskdga i love how jin calls ai "baby" and "sweetie" and ;alskdng;asd he'd be the cutest father ever and srsly needs to procreate now and, and. yamapi letting ai call her pi and then when jin just slips up and says it but yamapi likes it a;lskdngalsdg and the note! the scribbled out part, omg. such an inspired idea to do it that way. and just so, so cute. omg.

i'm grinning so wide right now, this was just adorable. thank you so much, anon-san! ♥

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[identity profile] lineelu2001.livejournal.com 2010-04-03 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
OMFG. This is so adorable my heart cant contain. ;-; Jin being awkward Jin but a sweet and utterly lovable dad nonetheless. Ai-chan easy acceptance to Pi. And your Pi, so utterly touchy feely to Jin and sweeetttt.

Thank you for replying to the prompt. ^^

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[identity profile] changetje.livejournal.com 2010-04-03 05:40 pm (UTC)(link)
aksdlsakd;sa OMG *____* That was so cute and perfect and gawd, I love the image of Jin with a kid. He should like - have one right now. I also love how he calls her 'sweetie'. And the note, the note! With the scribbled-out part, that made me 'awww' in RL. Just - awesome.

Thanks so much for writing this prompt! :D

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[identity profile] hilaryscribbles.livejournal.com 2010-04-04 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Pi.

I want his background story, too. Where are all the people Pi cares about? T_________T I LOVE THIS.

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[identity profile] tinyangl.livejournal.com 2010-04-06 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Totally enjoyed this! I love Papa!JE stories and papa!Jin is one of my personal favorites. :D Love the relationships with them all and how easily Yamapi was able to move into their lives. ♥♥ (Also the note Yamapi left. omg so cute.)