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The Pin Anon-CommentFic Exchange: The Second

♥ PIN FIC ANONYMEME ♥
THE SECOND

Okay guys, time to fess up! Comment to anything you wrote with your username, or something to say I WROTE THIS, so that we know who to fawn over for the awesome fics posted ♥

You are all free to repost, and if anyone is still writing, that's great! You don't have to post it anon now, though. Either reply to the prompt with the fic, or post it up and link to it so that your recipient knows where to look :D

Thank you all so much! The turnout was wonderful, and the fic, even better ♥

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Rules:
> Requests must be Pin (that is, Yamapi/Jin) centric. Other pairings/characters (male and female) are welcome, but Pin (or Pin+1,etc) must be the focus.
> Drama/Movie characters are a-OK!
> Make sure you give your request a rating if you do (or don't) want fluff/gen/porn.
~~> Requests and replies must be anonymous. You are free to reveal yourself from April 14th, unless it dies before then.~~

Fulfilled Requests:
> Hayato/Akira
> Wake-Up Call by

sashjun, reposted here
> Ai for You by

myxstorie, reposted here
> New Neighbours by

death_note13
> Distance by

tatoeba, reposted here
> Making the Impossible Possible by

tatoeba, reposted here
> Baby Don't Go by

death_note13
> Nice Day for a White Wedding by

myxstorie, reposted here
> Lean on Me by

tatoeba, reposted here
> Bundle of Joy by

myxstorie, reposted here
> Of Waterfalls and Kisses by

sashjun, reposted here
> Long Way Down by

death_note13
> Troublemaker by

tatoeba, reposted here
> Property of Yamashita Tomohisa by

zheinpathos, reposted here
> Don't Meet the Parents by

elizajet

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Jin and Rina get married. And Yamapi has to watch his baby sister, whom he'd do anything to keep happy, marry the only person he's ever loved.

Whether Jin ever finds out about Yamapi's feelings, or if they get together is up to the anon. Any rating is fine.

It had all started off so innocently. Best friends from the moment they laid eyes on each other, Jin all but lived on the Yamashita's sofa, a permanent, Akanishi-sized dent in the cushion. Rina had been so small then, blushing and scampering away whenever Jin was around, and the pair of them had thought her little crush was hilarious, teased her mercilessly for it until Yamapi's mother had scolded them.

Time had gone by so fast back then, days filled with classes from eight in the morning until nine at night, biology, english, maths, dance, vocals, gym. Dinner was wolfed down during the walk from school to work, because by the time they arrived home just before ten, they were too tired to do anything more than shower and fall into bed - usually the same one.

It's not all that different now, except the hours are longer and when he collapses onto his bed, it's always empty.

Yamapi doesn't remember when me and Jin became Jin and I, when he'd gone from being a slightly selfish child to the polite young man everyone expected him to be. He doesn't remember, either, when me and Jin or Jin and I had become all he wanted from life, the moment he'd realised that his life was Jin and that all he could see of his future was beer and pizza on the sofa with bad American movies, laughter covering up Jin's horrible translations, untidy brown hair peeking out of the top of the covers in the morning, wide yawns and bare feet padding down the hall and sleepy smiles over breakfast.

He doesn't say anything, though, can't, won't. It's not that he needs time to come to terms with it - Jin's always been a constant in his life, and taking that next step doesn't feel anywhere near as strange as Yamapi thinks it ought to - but by the time he finally notices that there isn't space for a woman in his life next to Jin, Jin and Rina have already been going steady for six months.

Yamapi loses his faith in fate the day he realises he's in love with his best friend, and can't do anything about it.

Rina is happy, more than happy, and Jin, too, smiles even more than before. Jin's being the man Yamapi's always wanted for his little sister - he's steady, reliable, dependable (Everything you're not as a friend, Yamapi had laughed one night when it was just the two of them, and Jin had kicked him off of the sofa), and his eyes shine with adoration every time he looks at her.

Yamapi's too busy not looking closely enough to let his own feelings show that he doesn't see the same sparkle in Jin's eyes for him, too.

Yamapi's mother is over the moon when he finally proposes, and when Rina tells them the date over dinner, Yamapi smiles and congratulates them just like he should. While the women are fawning over the ring sparkling on Rina's finger, Jin frowns gently, questioningly across the table at him, and Yamapi hates that he still loves the way Jin can read him like a book. He excuses himself with a nod of apology under the pretence of an early start in the morning, and escapes before Jin can start asking questions.

It's a white, Western-style wedding; of course it is, it's Jin. It's small, private, and their families and close friends are all gathered, waiting.

Yamapi knows this is it. Jin is straightening his jacket in the mirror and running his hands over his hair, slicked back into a tight ponytail while Yamapi watches, watches, can't tear himself away now even if his life depended on it. Then Jin's looking at his reflection, turning to cock his head to one side with that tiny furrow in his brow that Yamapi always wants to smooth out with his thumb, and he can't keep it out of his eyes any more. He can't pretend any more, can't go on wondering what if, needs to know with every fibre of his being.

What is it? Jin's asking, but he knows already, What's wrong?

Yamapi doesn't answer - they've never needed words before - and when he takes that final step, Jin meets him half way, pressing their lips together.

Jin tastes of salt, of desperation, and he kisses back like he's a dying man trying to drink the life from Yamapi's mouth. Yamapi's hands fumble with Jin's hair, fingers tangling and pulling it free, mussing it up because Jin's never been neat and tidy. Jin's face is wet when he pulls away, closing puffy eyes against Yamapi's tiny, pathetic little whimper, and he covers swollen lips and a red nose with shaking hands, drawing in a long, shuddering breath.

I'm sorry, he's saying, turning his back. Yamapi can feel the world crashing down around him and this, this is so much worse than not knowing.

You took too long.

"I'm sorry, he's saying, turning his back. Yamapi can feel the world crashing down around him and this, this is so much worse than not knowing.

You took too long."

This broke my heart. T-T

Thank you for the commentfic!

I'm sorry~ thank you for reading :D ♥

T__________________________________T OMG. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. A;LSKDNG;ALSDKNG;ALSDKGA;SLDG THIS. IT'S PERFECT. I-I DON'T EVEN HAVE THE WORDS FOR IT. YAMAPI'S LOVE IS SO BITTERSWEET, JIN AND RINA DATING IS JUST CUTE, AND THEN THE ENDING, OMG. THEY KISS AND JIN'S YOU TOOK TOO LONG OH MY GOD. ;ASLKDNG;ALSGDA ;___________________________; SOBBING.

ANON-SAN THANK YOU SO, SO MUCH. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT AND I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. A;SLKDGNALSDG ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

lklkaslkda;slkd THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REQUESTING. I WOKE UP THIS MORNING, SAW YOUR PROMPT, FLAILED, AND SPENT THE NEXT HOUR UNABLE TO GET BACK TO SLEEP BECAUSE I COULDN'T STOP WRITING IT IN MY HEAD XD

This is totally my favourite prompt so far, ilusm for requesting it (and really, I should have known it was someone like you ^_~ *creepy* )

I STILL LOVE YOU FOR THIS PROMPT. THANK YOU ♥

OMG I HAD A FEELING IT WAS YOU BUT I WASN'T SURE. A;SLKDNGASG VIX THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT. ;___; IT WAS PERFECT. ♥

my heart... give it back ;__;

that was beautiful, thank you!

kflaskd;laskd;lsa ANON, YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART ;_; That was so beautiful, but at the same time heart-breaking. Especially you took too long/

Thanks for writing, anon-san *_*

alksdjalksd THANK YOU ;_; ♥

I loved the prompt to begin with but maaaan, I loved this to tiny little pieces. The ending, their silent exchange and sfjwnbef Jin not saying anything, not needing to say anything, like that bond between them is what breaks Pi's heart, in the end :'< but I loved it in my little masochistic heart, thank you

;_;
wait this one
T_T

this was so bitter sweet, I want to hug them both D: it was great!

♥ thank you~

should have known this was you <3333

Oh. oh. this made me so so sad. even though I ship Jin/Rina like nobody's business, the whole thing was so bittersweet that I just wanted everyone to be happy somehow. D: It was beautiful regardless.

asldk idek how to respond to this comment, just that I LOVE it, thank you ;_;

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