The PIN Comment-Fic Post
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myxstorieTHE PIN COMMENT-FIC EXCHANGE
I think the idea behind this is pretty simple, but in case it's not obvious...
Rules:
- Any requests and fic must be Pin-centric. Other characters/pairings are
encouragedwelcome, but Pin must be the focus. - If you have a request, please at least try to write something! It's an exchange, play fair.
- Please try and make replies to requests longer than drabble length! (i.e. over 600 words)
And, to get the ball rolling...
Prompts:
POPOLO 2008.01 Interview
Yamapi's Hong Kong trip - Jin can't even manage a few days on his own
Pinnifer. Need I say anything more.
Frottage (the more public the better)
Phone sex
Pin watch porn
Yamapi thinks he's getting good at English. Jin proves him wrong.
And some picture prompts, because every anonymeme needs some!
Fulfilled Prompts: Author names will be added once they are revealed!
54 Times Pin Try to Have Hot Sex but Fail by![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
silver_rose88 - After Hours by crystallekil
- Bloody Jin (prompt pic) by no1_jo
- Bloody Jin #2 (prompt pic) by no1_jo
- Bodyswitch by
![[info]](https://p-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif)
silver_rose88 - Epic-Prostitute!Jin by shatteredinu
- Girls Just Wanna Have Fun by silver_rose88
- Jin/Ryo/Shirota/Pi Foursome by anamuan
- Jinnifer desu by crystallekil
- Kinky S&M Pin by spurious
- Lonely Yamapi by shatteredinu
- Never Underestimate the Power of Baby Sisters bycrystallekil
- Our Special Brand of Member-Ai by silver_rose88
- Phone Booth by crystallekil
- Pin Angst by myxstorie
- Pin Falling in Love by shatteredinu
- Pin Have Sex in a Room full of Sleeping NEWS Members by shatteredinu
- Pin Have Sex in Someone Else's Bed by silver_rose88
- Pin Voyeurism by kyuushin
- Pornstar!Pin by silver_rose88
- School Reunion Pin by myxstorie
- Simply Want to Feel by beililee
- Stoner!Pin by spurious
- Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #1) by anonymous
- Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #2) bymyxstorie
Reveals are upon us!
After some prompting, I have decided to leave prompts open, except replies no longer need to be anonymous ^_^
Re: (from anonymous commenter)
Date: 2008-11-26 12:53 am (UTC)Yamapi bitches, a lot. It is his main pasttime at home it seems, running his mouth off about how hard his work is and how he doesn't have a minut to himself to even think let alone do anything fun. While Jin stands and listens like a dutiful Jin (because there really is no other way to describe the Pi/Jin dynamic without a large handful of nouns that barely touch on the connection they share) and thinks that if time is so precious to Pi then maybe he shouldn't waste so much of it bitching and just fuck him already.
But he endures it, it's what Pi wants and Jin loves him, eternally and unconditionally and would never let him go over something so trivial, would never let him go over anything.
So he waits, and bides his time, adopting his best and most effective seductive face as Pi rambles on, oblivious for now, while Jin makes a game of it, playful for now as he tests his own allure against the strength of Pi's absorbtion in his own annoyance until Jin's gaze is ignorable no longer and the words spilling from Yamapis lips falter and die half voiced. His eyes are following the progress of Jins tongue, moistening his own lips, casually almsot, but pair it with the lowered eyelids and the look of bliss that blooms on the older mans face as his tongue completes the journey like his lips are made of the finest confectionary and he has never tastest anything so sweet and there's not one iota of innocence about it.
Those lips, previously flapping in continuous complaint are hanging open now, slack and forgotten , as all the other mans senses focused on keeping his eyes firmly on the prize his body moving of its own accord to zero in on that one focal point before Jin is tired of waiting any longer and thrusts his tongue forward and into the waiting space, which welcomes what he gives without a second thought.
Jin loves Pi when he's like this, so overtaken with anticipation and want that he becomes more submissive than even he will ever realise, just enough will of his own to be interesting but relative putty in Jin's hands and a total slave to his tongue. So it is nothing to have him stripped, waiting, legs spread wide in invitation, begging Jin to come and fuck him, kiss him, touch him, anything more than just look.
Pi is spilling out endless noises, desperate and needy and lacking in anything resembling his everyday pride as Jin is careful to touch him only were the solitary finger is preparing him, teasing him with such a small yet powerfully intimate touch before adding another and upping the tempo to boot, more than a little impatient himself now to be fully inside the younger man already.
And when he does sink home, it is heaven.
The noises that were once desperate morph into shouts of agreement as Jin increases his efforts, not choosing to prolong their encounter today. Moans of 'more' and 'harder and 'yessssssssssssss, like that' verbalising their sex like a common whore with crude appreciations of how perfectly Jin is fucking him, how deep, how hard, how amazing it feels.
And Jin is so close, can taste his impending orgasm on the tip of his tongue but it's being repelled, the shrill tones of Pi's voice grating against the delicate nerves of his inner ear, just one last straw to hearing that voice today and it's too much. He grits his teeth to drown out the irritant but it just wasn't working, that one thing preventing this moment from being the perfection it ought to be and before he could stop himself he was yelling,
"SHUT UP. SHUT. THE. FUCK. UP!!"
Pounding into the body beneath him with renewed vigour as his anger fueled his pistoning hips, bearing his entire weight downwards as though he could smother out the annoying noise by blocking their source from the air.
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Date: 2008-11-26 12:54 am (UTC)Something must have gotten through that thick head, however, because Pi is quieter from then on, not bothering to move to clean his body of dried trails of blood, letting Jin go about his business and not uttering a single complaint, merely watching, a fixed stare following the older man's every move about the apartment.
He is rigid at first, tensed as if he's struggling with his own shift in personality and Jin doesn't like it, can feel the tension beneath his partners skin with every touch, every grope and as much as he loves a firm arse this isn't what he wants.
So he coaxes it out of him, being gentle and loving and attentive waiting on his unhappy roommate as though it was his pleasure to do so, until he feels the tension leave, gradually at first, subtle releases of muscles beneath taut skin but before long he's relaxed again, lying limp and comfortable against the pillows he is sitting on.
When he fucks him again the next morning, Pi doesn't complain that he's too rough, too forceful, that he isn't being loving enough and Jin is happy that Yamapi has changed his ways and they skip work, careless of the consequences of doing so, to sit in bed and watch tv, to just be together and enjoy the companiable silence between them as Jin lets Yamapi slump heavily onto his shoulder, caressing a cold cheek and idling reminding himself to turn the heating up when they got up.
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Date: 2008-11-26 08:40 pm (UTC)maybe he shouldn't waste so much of it bitching and just fuck him already.
HAHAHAHAHA WIN <3 We all know Jin's obsessed with sex
But he endures it, it's what Pi wants and Jin loves him, eternally and unconditionally and would never let him go over something so trivial, would never let him go over anything.
OMG I take back the unfluffy and I love it! *swoons*
layful for now as he tests his own allure against the strength of Pi's absorbtion
*snorts* LOVE IT!
"SHUT UP. SHUT. THE. FUCK. UP!!"
SERZS{YLPDK@JH$£W"L$EHTSR *flails*
OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD. I ADORE THIS. SO MUCH. SO SO SO SO MUCH!!! *showers you with love* That's AMAZING *__* Sick, but amazing XDDDD I LOVE NECROPHILIAC JIN! IT'S LIKE TAKING HIS STUPID AND TURNING IT ON HIS HEAD <3333333 THANK YOU! THIS WAS MY FAVOURITE PROMPT SO FAR AND THE FIC IS DEFINITELY MY FAVOURITE TOO! SRAE%{WU$E^JH *spazzes more over it*
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Date: 2008-11-27 01:09 am (UTC)Well the necrophilia idea has been floating around ever since you sent me that vid ages back, so it was a good opportunity to put it into actual writing ^_^ Not that with Pi you'd see much differnce anyway, hence the perfect match :P
Just damn that I've already done too many vamp ones to have the blood prompt me in that way again and still be original at all :S
(and I will still remain anonymous in sport of the meme, cuz whats the point otherwise)
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Date: 2008-11-27 11:59 am (UTC)Lmao, that was one disturbing video >_< But I rather like it XDD Nick was saying how he liked the song, so I showed him the video.. *grins evilly*
And HAHAHAHAHA You're so mean to Pi XDD I love it ♥
This was AMAZING. I honestly thought it would get abandoned, because it's not cute or fluffy or smutty but I thought if it somehow did get written, it would be all vampiric.. yours was SO much better *_*
I still need to choose a date to set the reveals for >_< How long do these things normally run for?
Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-28 12:52 am (UTC)Tbh I cant for the life of me remember the song, but the video I can XD It's abotu time he wasn't worshipped from every side I think!!!!
Pah, blood is far too fun a prompt to pass up! Though I can see why you think so with Pin fans being so narrow-minded in their tastes generally. I was half thinking of doing another one for the blood prompt, but we'll see how it goes ^_^
About a week I think? It depends who's writing, cuz a lot of people unreveal themselves as soon as they get a compliment.
Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-28 02:02 am (UTC)The only line I can remember at the moment is 'cause everybody's gotta die sometimes, so bye bye' XDD ohhh and the thing with the heart, and those skeletons banging cutlery and shouting 'eat it eat it eat it' *_*
OMG PLEASE DO. You already know I'll love you forever regardless, but.. but.. just please? XDD I want to write you something, but I have no idea who or what to write about X_x And I want to write more for this, but jehols is taking over the entirety of my fic-writing time atm >_
Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-27 07:31 pm (UTC)It's very hard to picture Yamapi acting "bitchy", considering he never complains about *anything*, but the idea of this fic is just amazing. Yes, is very far out there compared with the fuff and crack people always write when it comes to pin, and I love all that, but this... thank you for writing something different, so raw and twisted, it's really good!
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Date: 2008-11-27 10:56 pm (UTC)Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-27 11:36 pm (UTC)I like it because it's good writing, and I don't get scared easily. I can be a kinky person when it comes to writing. I love the crack and the regular porn, but disturbing images well written are just my favorites, probably because there's not much of it out there ;)
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Date: 2008-11-27 11:54 pm (UTC)So agreed! I like some good fluff or smut or crack, I like anything if it's written well, but I have a bit of a soft spot for anything slightly different like this, especially when it's written as well as this is ^_^
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Date: 2008-11-28 12:56 am (UTC)Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-28 01:12 am (UTC)Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-11-28 01:21 am (UTC)here ya go (http://community.livejournal.com/pleasure_garden/8331.html) though possibly only Scarlet is to your taste in the JE side (cuz I write a lot of Super Junior mostly) but feel free to have a browse around of course ^_^
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Date: 2008-11-29 01:27 pm (UTC)I loved this so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! *_______*
Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-12-01 03:50 am (UTC)It makes me happy to see people enjoying something I've written <3
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Date: 2008-12-02 04:21 am (UTC)Re: Part 2, end.
Date: 2008-12-02 05:45 am (UTC)