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THE PIN COMMENT-FIC EXCHANGE

I think the idea behind this is pretty simple, but in case it's not obvious...

Rules:

Any requests and fic must be Pin-centric. Other characters/pairings are ~~encouraged~~ welcome, but Pin must be the focus.
If you have a request, please at least try to write something! It's an exchange, play fair.
Please try and make replies to requests longer than drabble length! (i.e. over 600 words)

Anything goes! Porn, not porn, fluff, crack, weird fetishes and such like. Just be sure to say if you specifically do or don't want porn! ~~But let's be honest, most of us are just here for the porn.~~

And, to get the ball rolling...

Prompts:

POPOLO 2008.01 Interview
Yamapi's Hong Kong trip - Jin can't even manage a few days on his own
Pinnifer. Need I say anything more.
Frottage (the more public the better)
Phone sex ~~because I am totally shameless and adore fics on this~~ (could be doubled up with the HK prompt?)
Pin watch porn
Yamapi thinks he's getting good at English. Jin proves him wrong.

And some picture prompts, because every anonymeme needs some!

Fulfilled Prompts: Author names will be added once they are revealed!

5 4 Times Pin Try to Have Hot Sex but Fail by silver_rose88
After Hours by crystallekil
Bloody Jin (prompt pic) by no1_jo
Bloody Jin #2 (prompt pic) by no1_jo
Bodyswitch by silver_rose88
Epic-Prostitute!Jin by shatteredinu
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun by silver_rose88
Jin/Ryo/Shirota/Pi Foursome by anamuan
Jinnifer desu by crystallekil
Kinky S&M Pin by spurious
Lonely Yamapi by shatteredinu
Never Underestimate the Power of Baby Sisters by crystallekil
Our Special Brand of Member-Ai by silver_rose88
Phone Booth by crystallekil
Pin Angst by myxstorie
Pin Falling in Love by shatteredinu
Pin Have Sex in a Room full of Sleeping NEWS Members by shatteredinu
Pin Have Sex in Someone Else's Bed by silver_rose88
Pin Voyeurism by kyuushin
Pornstar!Pin by silver_rose88
School Reunion Pin by myxstorie
Simply Want to Feel by beililee
Stoner!Pin by spurious
Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #1) by anonymous
Why Pi Got His Perm (Reply #2) by myxstorie
Reveals are upon us!

Please reply to each prompt you wrote from the lj username you would like to be linked to ^_^

After some prompting, I have decided to leave prompts open, except replies no longer need to be anonymous ^_^

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From: (Anonymous)

It's twisted, and makes him feel dirty, and that's why Pi likes it. He likes kneeling there, totally naked, everyone's eyes on him. He likes the attention, and he knows he can put on a good show. But what makes it so hot, what makes him so hot, is how dirty it makes him feel. Knowing he's about to suck Yuu off while Ryo and Jin watch. Knows they're going to jerk off to it, to him, right there. That maybe, if he plays things right, he can get them to come on him before they fuck him. That's what he likes about it. That's what he needs, and just thinking about has him moving his hands, pulling Yuu out quickly but carefully. Has him moving his mouth forward to take as much of Yuu in as quickly as possible. Has him hard up against his stomach, precome beading and smearing on his abs.

He can't get enough. Pi thinks it's a little sick how much he loves it, how he wants more of Yuu in his mouth, how he wants all of it. He wants to choke on it, feel it burn as it hits the back of his throat. Yuu groans, something about how good it feels, how much of a slut Pi is, down on his knees, begging for it, and fuck, Pi just drinks it all up. Out of the corner of his eye, he can see Jin moving sideways, coming around front where he can see the stretch of Pi's mouth over Yuu's cock. Pi knows Jin has a thing for his mouth, knows he likes to watch. In effect, knows what this is doing to Jin, and that just makes him harder, makes him want to take more of Yuu, drive them both crazy at once.

Yamapi pulls back, curls his tongue around the head. It's messy, but no less expert for that, out in the open so Jin can have a good view. Yuu's hips twitch towards him, and Jin moans, loud and obscene, and Pi loves it. He loves this, and pulls his lips tight as he sinks back down to the base of Yuu's cock, because he needs more.

Except he doesn't make it all the way, because Ryo's got a hand in his hair again, holding him back. Pi's furious. He wants it, he wants Yuu to come down his throat, he wants Jin moaning in the background because it looks so fucking amazing. He wants it, and that's why Ryo won't let him have it. Pi knows it, Ryo knows it. Everyone in the fucking room knows it. Pi does his best to glare up at Ryo, but with the angle, all he can really do is glare at Ryo's penis, pointing past his face, and part of the hand Ryo's got wrapped loosely around it. That's frustrating too, and by the way Ryo chuckles and shakes Pi's head by the hair a little, he knows that as well.

When Ryo starts pulling Pi off Yuu, all Pi can do is whine, desperate and frustrated in the back of his throat. He tightens his lips, trying to slow down at least when he can't move forward, but Ryo just says "Not like that. Not tonight," and then Yuu's helping him, the bastard traiter, pulling back too, and dammit all Pi wants is for him to come in his mouth.

"You," and Ryo shakes his head a little. Condescending little shakes. They only pull the slightest bit, but Pi can't stop them. They're to let Pi know who's in charge. "Have to be good." Pi whines, he can't help it, and Ryo shakes him a little harder. "If you're not good, you won't get to have any fun." Ryo holds his head still, speaks slowly, clearly. "Are you prepared to be good?"

Pi tries to nod, but Ryo doesn't loosen his hold any, so he can't. Licks his lips, and misses the feel of Yuu's cock in his mouth. His voice is a little rough when he forces out a "Yes."

"Good." Ryo finally lets go of his hair, and his scalp stings from the tightness of the grip. It makes heat coil in Pi's stomach, the way it hurts in time with his heartbeat, pulse with the same rhythm as the throb in his cock. Ryo moves forward to wear Pi can see him, then motions at Jin, who digs into a pocket and fishes out a tube of lube. Ryo looks at Pi pointedly, and he suppresses a shiver as he reaches up a hand for the tube.

From: (Anonymous)

He knows what Ryo wants him to do. He doesn't have to look at Yuu or Jin to know they want it too, and if he's honest with himself, he might love this best of all. He untwists the cap and squeezes some onto his fingers, then settles back on his back. He spreads his legs, watches the three of them move to where they'll be able to see, and bites his lips as he pushes a finger in.

He doesn't go slowly, he couldn't possibly, not now, not when he's so hard, and definitely not when he knows they're watching. It drives him crazy. He feels exposed, and so, so dirty, knowing they're watching him spread himself open, knowing they're getting off on watching him fuck himself. Yuu produces another tube, slicks up his palm and spreads it over the three of them. Pi watches as they jerk themselves off, and he speeds up, adds another finger, fucks himself hard. He's making a lot of noise now, legs spread wide, and pushing for purchase on the floor. He fucks himself harder, getting steadily louder, and it's not even about prep anymore, he's just watching them watch him and getting off on all of it.

And then Jin reaches over and taps Ryo's thigh, permission, slick fingers sliding on skin for a moment before Ryo moves forward. He pulls Pi's fingers out, ignoring Pi's frustrated whimper, and thrusts in, hard and fast. Pi's back arches and moans "fuuuuuck," and he's getting lube all over the carpet as his hands scrabble for purchase.

Ryo fucks him hard, harder even than he was fucking himself, and Pi just moans brokenly, can't even form words for how good it feels, not with Ryo pounding into him like that. Jin breaks first, moving over to Pi's head and guiding those gorgeous lips to his cock. Pi's too far gone to do a good job; he's too busy moaning to keep his lips closed, keep his teeth off Jin. He doesn't have to be at his best though, because just the sight of his lips and tongue on Jin's cock is enough to have him right on the edge.

Yuu doesn't last much longer, coming over to kneel at Pi's side. Ryo's grunting as Pi meets each of his thrusts with a backwards roll of his hips, and Jin's coming undone already, even though Pi's barely touched him. Yuu jerks his own cock, hand slip-sliding over slick skin faster, and faster until he comes all over Pi's chest. Pi jerks when Yuu's come hits him, jerks and moans, mouth falling slack, and Jin groans comes over Pi's face. Pi opens his mouth, tries to catch it. He moans again when he catches some on his tongue, and very nearly screams when another spurt hits him in the face, sticks to his hair.

Ryo slows down for the whole thing, rides it out, waits till Pi's attention is no longer divided before speeding back up again. Presses in faster, harder, pulls one of Pi's legs up so he can get in deeper. Pi feels like he's breaking apart. He can't concentrate everything feels so good: Ryo pounding into him, the way the carpet's rubbing his back raw, Yuu's come on his chest is hot, and Jin's come in his hair, dripping down his forehead. He feels dirty, and it's obscene how good it feels, being fucked like this. Knowing Jin and Yuu have their come all over him, and that they're watching him still. He loves it.

Ryo comes with a yell, hips stuttering to a stop. Comes inside him, and Yamapi can feel it. Ryo wasn't wearing a condom, and Yamapi can feel it and he feels absolutely filthy and gorgeous as he screams. Pi comes so hard he can't see, but he can feel his own come hit him in the chest, burning hot where Yuu's come was already cooling. His legs twitch and spasm, and screams again as his cock twitches, still trying even though he's spent and dry. It hurts like a mother, and the last thing Pi remembers thinking is that he never wants this to end.

The jewelry, it's just a pretense. The rest of it, that's real.

From:

pixisticks.livejournal.com

From:

ky-rin.livejournal.com

;laksfh'alsgja'skj'alskj'algjsa;slkfa;lskda;jshdalkjshdalksjhd I am yours, baby. ♥ do me now.

From:

saturnianlove.livejournal.com

SO DIRTY, SO HOT :X

From:

saturnianlove.livejournal.com

he feels absolutely filthy and gorgeous

and it's this part that sticks with me the most!! ♥ although this part is also *__*:

Ryo snaps the elastic on Pi's boxers once, enjoys the way he jumps a bit at the sting. He likes being able to do that to Pi, likes knowing how even a little bit turns him on. Jin, Jin likes watching Pi's cock twitch through the thin material of his boxers. Yuu is impatient, and just pulls them off and tangles his own fingers in Pi's hair to get him to step out of them.

nngh

From: (Anonymous)

asfglfk;asdfj;lksd That's the hottest thing I've read in months. God, possibly the hottest thing I've read like... ever. *_____________*

From: (Anonymous)

;lakjs;dglnkas;ldkgja;lskdng;alskjd *________________________* that. that. i-i don't even have words right now. omg so fucking hot and so amazing. *_________* <333333333333

From:

kyuushin.livejournal.com

I've been searching for this kind of fic ever since I noe Pi!!!

you seriously blew me away!!!!
i reallly hope that there are many more this type of fic!!!
i mean this type of Pi in fic...uwaaa saikyoooo!!!!!

<33333333333 ^^