The Pin Anon-CommentFic Exchange: The Second

[myxstorie]

♥ PIN FIC ANONYMEME ♥
THE SECOND


Okay guys, time to fess up! Comment to anything you wrote with your username, or something to say I WROTE THIS, so that we know who to fawn over for the awesome fics posted ♥

You are all free to repost, and if anyone is still writing, that's great! You don't have to post it anon now, though. Either reply to the prompt with the fic, or post it up and link to it so that your recipient knows where to look :D

Thank you all so much! The turnout was wonderful, and the fic, even better ♥

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Rules:
> Requests must be Pin (that is, Yamapi/Jin) centric. Other pairings/characters (male and female) are welcome, but Pin (or Pin+1,etc) must be the focus.
> Drama/Movie characters are a-OK!
> Make sure you give your request a rating if you do (or don't) want fluff/gen/porn.
> Requests and replies must be anonymous. You are free to reveal yourself from April 14th, unless it dies before then.

Fulfilled Requests:
> Hayato/Akira
> Wake-Up Call by sashjun, reposted here
> Ai for You by myxstorie, reposted here
> New Neighbours by death_note13
> Distance by tatoeba, reposted here
> Making the Impossible Possible by tatoeba, reposted here
> Baby Don't Go by death_note13
> Nice Day for a White Wedding by myxstorie, reposted here
> Lean on Me by tatoeba, reposted here
> Bundle of Joy by myxstorie, reposted here
> Of Waterfalls and Kisses by sashjun, reposted here
> Long Way Down by death_note13
> Troublemaker by tatoeba, reposted here
> Property of Yamashita Tomohisa by zheinpathos, reposted here
> Don't Meet the Parents by elizajet



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Ai for You [PG, part 2/5]

[(Anonymous)]

"Hey, uh, my name's Akanishi, and this is my daughter, Ai, we live opposite you?"

"Oh, hi! I'm Yamashita." He's still smiling, a little wider now, and bows politely before offering a hand to Ai, which she shakes with all the firm, awkward exuberance of a child, "Did you want to come in?"

Jin struggles to bow in return, and Yamashita's hands shoot out to catch the precarious stack of DVDs under Jin's arm.

"Thanks," Jin flushes awkwardly. "Um, no, but I was wondering if I could ask you a really huge favour..."

"Babysitter?" Yamashita asks, taking Ai's things from under Jin's arm and watching with eyes that sparkle knowingly.

Jin's cheeks burn a little redder, "Yeah, actually, I... I'm really sorry to ask it of you and I wouldn't do it if I had another choice and I hate leaving her with someone I don't know but-but if I get fired then I can't take care of her and then we'll be out on the streets because my parents don't have room and-"

"It's fine," Yamashita silences him, "No problem at all. Ai-chan can stay here with me and we can eat lots of yummy things while she tells me all your deepest, darkest secrets until you get back. Are you allergic to anything, Ai-chan?" He's looking at Ai when he speaks, and Jin can't help but like him, especially when she giggles excitedly and shakes her head. She's always been a quiet little thing, much like her mother; far more prone to hiding her face in his neck when presented with new people than even looking at them, so this, Jin thinks, is already a good start.

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When he comes home that night, having spent the whole afternoon distracted and hating himself for leaving his baby girl with a stranger, Jin's heart starts to race when Yamashita doesn't answer the door the moment he rings the bell. What if he'd run off with her, what if he'd taken her away and Jin would never see her again? What if he was really some part of a drug ring, and they were going to bring her up as an addict while she's too young to know better? What if-

There's a laugh from inside, high and sweet and melodic, followed by a war cry that may or may not have come from a man before the door is flung open. Yamashita is rather more dishevelled than he had been earlier, hair sticking up around his head in disarray, and Jin feels a smile tugging at his lips.

"Daddy!" Ai cries, flying down the corridor to throw her arms around Jin's legs, and he picks her up with a grin.

"Having a good time?" She nods, eyes alight in a way Jin's not used to seeing when other people are around, but then Yamashita's letting out another cry of success and diving behind a pile of cushions and blankets in one corner of the living room.

"Victory!" He declares triumphantly, and Ai shrieks and wriggles until Jin puts her down.

"Nooo!" She wails, all but flying across the room to leap on top of the other man, and Yamashita laughs loudly, launching a tickle-war on the loser.

Ai for You [PG, part 3/5]

[(Anonymous)]

"Daddy?" She asks one night as he's putting her to bed, Kuma-kun's mended arm proudly on display now that the bandage was gone.

"Hm?" Jin murmurs, tucking the covers in around her.

"When are we going to go and see Pi again?"

"Who's Pi, sweetie?"

"Yamapi," she says surely, and then, like it's the most obvious thing in the world, "The nii-san across the hall."

Jin's hand falters where it's brushing her long, dark hair away from her face and tucking it behind her ears, "Yamashita?"

She nods, "Un. He said his friends call him Yamapi, but because I'm special I can just call him Pi."

Jin's heard thuds a little harder, and he kisses her on the forehead, "Soon, baby. Soon."

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Ai for You [PG, part 4/5]

[(Anonymous)]

At first, Jin thinks it's only polite to give Yamashita some alone time after they've invaded his life every day for the past few weeks, and then it's gone a little too long for him to feel comfortable just crossing the hall and knocking on the door. The longer he waits, the harder it gets, until three weeks have passed and Jin wonders if Yamashita was just glad to be rid of them, wonders if there was really any heart behind all the things he'd said to Ai. He can't forget though, not with the way Ai talks about him every day, about whether Pi-niisan would like what she'd drawn at school, if Pi-niisan would have enjoyed their class field trip to the temple, if Pi-niisan would prefer fish for dinner, like her, or chicken, like Daddy.

It takes him by complete surprise when he opens his door one evening to take the trash out, and finds Yamashita stood outside, hand raised to push the bell.

"I'm home!" The other man grins, and Jin automatically welcomes him back before it really sinks in.

"You left?"

Yamashita nods, "I told you I'd be away, I left you that note, remember?"

"You did?" Jin frowns, silent for a long moment before he remembers sifting through his junk mail rather haphazardly one morning and dumping it on the counter to be dealt with later. Much later, it seems, because the pile is still there, untouched.

"Oh! The note, right, o-of course..."

"You didn't get the note, did you?"

Jin's never been able to lie well, so he just looks away instead.

"Bakanishi," Yamashita smiles, and Jin's jaw drops, affronted for the split second it takes the other man to close the door behind him and throw his arm around Jin's shoulder, "Did you think I'd just abandoned you?"

"No!" Jin answers too quickly, and can feel his cheeks burning already, "N-not me..."

"Pi!"

Ai's grin looks wide enough to hurt as she all but skips towards them, and Yamashita releases Jin to scoop her up and spin her around in a circle, telling her how silly and hopeless her Daddy is over her giggles.

When the pair of them have calmed down, Yamashita tells Jin about his trip whilst happily looking through all of Ai's drawings from the past few weeks, listening to her explanations of each one in one ear and Jin's occasional comments in the other. It's effortless, like he was born to multitask, and Jin tries not to smile as the idea of Yamashita being the woman in this relationship crosses his mind.

Eventually, though, Yamashita misses something Ai says, and his eyes twinkle with amusement as she berates him with a disapproving look on her face. His apologies sound genuine, though, and Jin stands.

Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[(Anonymous)]

"Chinese or Italian... You're the one that's been away, what do you fancy, Pi?"

Yamapi turns to look at him with raised eyebrows, and Jin freezes.

"Sorry! S-Sorry, I, uh. Ai-chan's always saying it and I guess it just-"

Yamapi shushes him with a shake of his head. "I like it," he says, eyes still bright, and Jin's mouth twitches in return.

They decide on pizza. It's the weekend tomorrow, so Jin doesn't mind Ai staying up a little later than usual to watch movies with them, and it's far easier to handle a slice of pizza with both eyes on the television than a pair of chopsticks. Jin leaves them both still looking through Ai's artwork, his daughter far happier now that she's got all of Yamapi's attention to herself.

The pizza menu is on top of the stack of mail on the kitchen counter, and with a glance behind him to check they're still engrossed, Jin leafs through it until he finds Yamapi's note, hastily scrawled on a sheet of lined paper torn from a notebook.

Jin,

Going to Hokkaido for a few weeks for work.

Sorry I didn't tell you properly - you're out and it's all happened really last minute.

Tell Ai-chan I'm sorry and make sure she knows that Kuma-kun's arm still needs lots of rest!

Try not to miss me too much!

- Yamashita

Between the last two lines, there's something else that Yamapi's scribbled through, over and over until it's all but illegible, but if Jin holds it up to the light and squints his eyes just so, he can just about make it out.

I know I'll miss you.

OP

[tatoeba.livejournal.com]

a;lskdn;alsdkngalsdg this is so, so cute and totally what i wanted! ;laskdga i love how jin calls ai "baby" and "sweetie" and ;alskdng;asd he'd be the cutest father ever and srsly needs to procreate now and, and. yamapi letting ai call her pi and then when jin just slips up and says it but yamapi likes it a;lskdngalsdg and the note! the scribbled out part, omg. such an inspired idea to do it that way. and just so, so cute. omg.

i'm grinning so wide right now, this was just adorable. thank you so much, anon-san! ♥

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[lineelu2001.livejournal.com]

OMFG. This is so adorable my heart cant contain. ;-; Jin being awkward Jin but a sweet and utterly lovable dad nonetheless. Ai-chan easy acceptance to Pi. And your Pi, so utterly touchy feely to Jin and sweeetttt.

Thank you for replying to the prompt. ^^

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[changetje.livejournal.com]

aksdlsakd;sa OMG *____* That was so cute and perfect and gawd, I love the image of Jin with a kid. He should like - have one right now. I also love how he calls her 'sweetie'. And the note, the note! With the scribbled-out part, that made me 'awww' in RL. Just - awesome.

Thanks so much for writing this prompt! :D

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[hilaryscribbles.livejournal.com]

Oh, Pi.

I want his background story, too. Where are all the people Pi cares about? T_________T I LOVE THIS.

Re: Ai for You [PG, part 5/5]

[tinyangl.livejournal.com]

Totally enjoyed this! I love Papa!JE stories and papa!Jin is one of my personal favorites. :D Love the relationships with them all and how easily Yamapi was able to move into their lives. ♥♥ (Also the note Yamapi left. omg so cute.)